coolmaster730's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[mouse of the future 1]

This was good I liked the use of action script!

Very good, I think that this will be well accepted on NG. Good Job! liked the cursors.

[Preloader Loaded!]

Ehhhh I cant neccesarily RATE THIS...

You seem cool, Just for the info you can search on Yahoo or Google for a site called "Imageshack" I cant give you a direct link to the site because of NG Review rules... But on that site you can upload flash SWF files to see how they work on the web! Well just wanted to give you the info, I hope your puzzle game comes out soon!

-Coolmaster730

blaalb responds:

uhm .. i tried on imageshack but it took me directly to thesong itself.. :| .. i will PM you when it comes out.. ^__^

[Fangs - Chapter 1]

VERY FUN!

It was a very fun game! Make more chapters! lol

-Coolmaster730

Enky responds:

I'll try, depends if more people will like it. Thanks for taking your time to comment.

[Xmas Corner]

Very addicting!

10 Stars!!! This game is very well done and obviously made by a proffesional websites finest flash animators! Very good, the PERFECT HOLIDAY GAME!!!!

[Deep Sea Dive]

this is actually really well done

This is a really well done flash game, seriously. But theres only one problem, in my oppinion it doesn't have much "Style". Its a little bit (if possible) TO well-done its like a proffesionaly made game. For some reason It didn't entertain me. I respect you though for the amount of time and effort that you put into this brilliant game. And I applaud you and gave you a "5". But I thought it lacked style, which in my oppinion didn't show how you act and you're style, and what you like it's not exactly "ART". I know NG isn't looking for Art but I just wanted to write a review and felt it was important to say that. Well Keep making some more games NG could really use em' also try making different styles of animations and games. That entertains people more in my oppinion. I think you're a talented flash animator and respect you ffor you're time and effort put into this. But just to help in future makings, try being DIFFERENT. Im not being mean i just would like to see the difference thats all. MAKE MORE!

EarthWind responds:

Thanks for the review, I totally understand what you mean. This game and the others on my site were made while I was learning actionscript/flash/haxe. So yes, they are knockoffs of others, but I have more ideas, and I will be sure to post the more original/fun/neat ones here. Don't worry I won't plaster the walls with everything I make. This was more of a test run for fun.

Thanks for saying it looked professional, although I really am just a one person team (if thats possible). Thats why theres no music, because thats the one thing I can't do.

Sam :)

[Breakout GAME!!]

This is good but some minor movie clip glitches...

This is an awsome submittion nice work! But unfortunantly I could tell you didn't posistion the bricks that you had to hit in the center of the movie clip exactly making it a little harder to hit because you had to hit exactly one spot. You should use another actionscript to make it so that when u hit the movieclip the ball clip has to reflect and the brick clip goes away to the next frame (blank). Otherwise this was good, also I couldn't get to the next level for some reason... I know when you might have played it befor you submitted it here it might have worked. But when flash objects are embedded on a big server something usually goes wrong. For instance an actionscript fails, frames go off when the stop(); actionscript is put on it. That is common But I don't think that this submittion should be blammed and should be played because besides those minor glithes the games fun, (since im a breakout fanatic...) Well even if this submittion for one reason or another DOES get blammed look on the bright side, it was probably only because of those glitches I noticed. Big DEAL you can fix them and put them back up here and it'll STAY up here. Good Job! And keep on making these types of games I like em'!?!?!?!

[Cursors Of The Present]

This wasn't good enough

In my oppinion this submition lacked interest. If I had made this and I pressed control enter befor I published this SWF file than I wouldnt wanna watch the rest of this. It lacked interest, I didn't watch the entire thing but I could tell where it was going (nowhere). This in my oppinion should be blammed and shouldn't continue to survive on this site any longer. This website is supposed to be good but unfortunantly I see to much Crap on this site and want to help out the admins by pointing out bad peices and unfortunantly dude. You got Blammed, Well nice try and remember next time review you're submition befor actually submiting it. Thats what I do and helps on many other flahs portals.

Robotcow responds:

yea i did reveiw it over and i liked it when i watched it. so dont assume i dont check my work or dont come out with this ground-breaking flash that everyone likes, because im not that good at flash. for my ability and knowledge i think i did pretty damn good.

[INXS: Bang the Drum]

Great! Very Well Done!!

Make some more games like this for NG! the more games YOU make the More I bet NG will become a better and funner Site! Seriously Well Done!! And Please make some more! PLEASE!!!?!? Also I will be checking up on you're submittions and give you some good voting to give you some more weight to you're voting average. Also Great job good quality game with Awsome actionscripting and tweening effort put into this .swf file Seriously you're one of the best well-done game makers in Flash I've ever seen. Also Fun Game, make some more and if you can make a Fighting game next, and send me a message! You Rock MAN good Job in the future and keep makeing GAMES IN FLASH?!?!??!?!?!?

[- Martian Invasion -]

O.K. Submittion but nothing to new

This was a pretty good game. I say you should do some New ones! Good job but next time try not to make the game that hard but otherwise Good Job bravo! good for you!!!???

Sk8erGirl14 responds:

....cool cool...

thanks for the review...